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LOVE STORY

Remembering of the time, and ur lovely touch
that silence between , that said so much
Every moment ,like i was in heaven
u and me , soul but one
don’t know the reason , y you are away
hoping we’ll b together , perhaps some day
my tears still tell me , something went wrong
Every time i listen to your fav. song
u left but some where in my heart
i know its not the end,just the start
wish i could forget u , i thought and cried
but how can i plan such a suicide?
was there something i said? i still wonder
my biggest regret . a blunder
hope you will be back, every passing day
and realize i just said , as i always say
don’t know for how long i can bear this pain
as this deep void in my heart , makes me insane.
Wil u come back If i say SORRY?
or this will be another heart breaking story?
……….
lalit singh bhakuni

http://drvirus001.blogspot.com/

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  1. yesh says:

    good one.. i like ur poems :) They’re are pretty good…
    is this love thing for the contest?

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  2. thanks u sooooooooo much buddy………. Iam also expecting more from u………

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  3. ritzy says:

    nice poem dude.. :) )

    keep it up.. !!

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  4. thanks you ritzy …………..

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  5. saurabhv1 says:

    Nice… :)

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  6. sheetal says:

    that was awesome…..

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  7. thanks sheetal………

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