Eternal – 55 Fiction
Harsha | Oct 31, 2009 | 6 comments
Lying on his chest, she felt peaceful. He always had unconditional love to offer her. Importantly he had time for her. There were moments, they had sat lost in each others eyes. She never mentioned it, but he meant world to her.
Relatives entered room, to console her.
Little did they know; she had left with him.
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god! thats the most awesomest 55-fiction i’ve read! great great!
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hi geekogirl,
Thank you very much, am very happy you liked it. It was my first attempt at writing 55 fiction. Your comments will help me write more
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November 1st, 2009 at 6:28 pm
harsha! that was an awesome fiction indeed. . well expressed.. and quite a twist at the end! way to go, man! cheers!
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hi admin,
Thank you very much for your kind words, I am very happy you liked reading it
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gr8 one… when wud u write another?
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cool one yaar……….!
nice to read
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