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The Pain – It’s Sweet Dear

What has happened today ? – I’m acting strange;

Is this the effect of yesterday ?

What miracle in me is this change ?

What happened the day before today ?

I met you – Is that responsible for all this ?

I see you in every step I walk

From my eyes, never I want you to miss

With you, supposingly all alone, I talk

I close my eyes – you are in front of me

Open them – the world is just blank you see

What have you done with your magical charm ?

For my mind no more remains calm

What was the spell that you cast on me ?

For now, this today, I’m yearning to be

My ownself, my dear, my ownself

Never have I asked anyone for such stupid help !!!

I walk for a while and think of you

I stop there till it’s hours a few

I read a while, I dream of you

“I’m with you”, and this, not for moments a few

What have you done ? – Oh ! My Dear !

What have you done ?

I feel you are to me very near

And I think of nothing and none

I search for you on the path I go

I follow your footprints though there are a “No”

I write about you wherever it may be

This “The Prince of my Dreams” – There is he

Your divine face is imprinted on my heart

Which strikes my veins as a powerful dart

Blood starts oozing out in a happy hue

It says – “Oh Dear ! I Love You !!!”

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  1. yesh says:

    hey… thats too good. . . guess ur feelings are fresh. . coz it reflects in ur writing :) cheers sangeetha!

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    Scintillating Sangeeta Reply:

    Thanks :) Feelings remain fresh all the while, its just the ambiance that keeps changing the moods :) Too philosophical to understand …… Anyway, Thanks buddy :)

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  2. stanley joshua says:

    superb expression of feelings..cheers

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    Scintillating Sangeeta Reply:

    Thanks :)

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  3. ritzy says:

    subtle and sweet… i loved reading it all the while..

    keep it up :)

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  4. ritzy says:

    subtle and sweet… i loved reading it all the while..

    keep it up gal :)

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